Art by Mike LeeDear Kind Sir(s) and/or Madam(s):
Per your company's longstanding dedication to open-ended product development and distribution defined by but not limited to the spirit and substance of paragraphs 9 through 11 on your Web page entitled “Acme Interactive FAQs: Development and Distribution,” please accept this humble and minor criticism. My son, Edward, happened upon your site while searching for a skin-care product called Blem25. It seems your company manufactures a product called Blend 25, and what with Acme bearing such similarity to acne — well, you know how search engines are these days. In short, unaware that he'd arrived at the wrong site, Edward mistakenly ordered one unit of your Blend 25, priced at $19.95 plus ground shipping, the same price that Edward usually pays for his Blem25.
For the next five to seven working days, Edward could scarcely contain his excitement about the impending arrival of his Blem25, for this was to be the first parcel ever delivered to him by men wearing shorts. Your product arrived promptly this afternoon via United Parcel Service, or UPS. As I'm sure you can imagine, when we opened the package we were taken well aback to find that your Blend 25 is something not only unlike Blem25 but illegal to apply to the face. Sensitive fellow that he is, distraught young Edward locked himself in the bathroom, where he remains as I write, some six hours later. And who can blame him? About an hour ago, I gave up on negotiating with Edward and went back online. I looked up your company's FAQs, which referred me to your 24-hour customer-service number. I called the number and listened to 20 minutes of Average White Band and Terry Jacks phone-tunes before speaking with a representative who identified herself only as “Squeaky.” Ms. Squeaky thought she was being cute and clever by referring to me as “ma'an,”
as in “Yes, ma'an,” “No, ma'an,” a satiric device stolen directly from the pages of William Kotzwinkle's 1974 novel, The Fan Man (ISBN 0679752455). When I confronted her with this unauthorized use of Mr. Kotzwinkle's work, she hung up on me. A few minutes later she called back and, attempting to disguise her voice by doing a vocal impersonation of Kotzwinkle, threatened my family with a mild burning sensation if I made any further attempts at getting our money back, a topic I hadn't yet introduced.
I attempted to reach Mr. Kotzwinkle at his home in Maine and was told that he was asleep and to call back tomorrow.
Tomorrow?! I'll have you know my husband or wife is an attorney. So am I, and so is Edward.
C. Duncan Parkhill, Esq.
cc: E. Duncan Parkhill, Esq.
bcc: The Honorable Sandy Duncan Parkhill
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